Shory story based on the situation that they suffered during industrial revolution & explanation for understanding.
Melancholy written by holly
1845.10.3
The morning started by the tranquil air. My mom was not in the house. I was too young to cook the food. My mom is always in the work. It's been longtime to enjoy my mom's warm meal. I felt so lonely at my house. It's been long time not to see my father. I almose missed my father. I don't even know what he is doing now. Maybe Protesting? Whenever i ask about my dad at midnight, my mom make me not ask again. Even today, She did before writing this diary. I really miss my friend. Tomorrow, i'm gonna go jie xin's house.
1845. 10.4
As same as yesterday, There were no food to eat in my house. I felt like stranger in my house. I came out for metting my best friend jie xin. The air made me keep coughing. She was daughter of first handcraft company. When i went her house before, It was just like stately home. however today was just plain. It was just like the gutter. What happend to her and her family? Even, she was not at her house. It's really suspensive mystery. I really miss her. Her mom was really nice to me.Howeverm now, Where is she on earth? Where are they? What about my father? How can i know the begginig of the suspensive mystery?
1845. 10.5
How can i solve this mystery? Where are they? What's happening to my parents, even my friend? Well,The country is getting weird , too. Why? Everyone seems puzzled? Some people seem that they were demostrating. What makes our nation this? It was not like this 5 years ago. We acturally got new technology. I'm feeling really boastful to my country about the technology. Our factory got automatic. Is there any relation between this situation and so we called; revolution? Is there anyone who could tell me?
Explanation : The setting of this short story is set by the 5 years later from the industrial revolution. That fact influenced all of this story. Industrial revolution is remebered as the beggining of technical life. That is good effect of industrial revolution. As some aspects, industrial revolution brought kind of bad effects to England. For instance, Air pollution, unemployment, industrialization, the gap between haves and have-nots.
★Reflection
-Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways? Bad aspects of the industrial revolution
-which other main topics does it also relate to? The situation of the industrial revolution.
Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?
This artifact took kind of a lot of time. I made new short story which formed as the diary to appear the natural reality of that period.
What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation and/or processing of this artifact? There were fatal pleague during that period. We just noticed about the fact that affects conveniently.
Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why, or why not? Yes, I wanted to try to make the new forms of the short story.
Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 is neutral) for following 4 criterion:
a) impact on the equality of your portfolio - 5
b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment - 5
c)Impact on your learning - 5
d)Level of creativity and originality - 4
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